Great Creative Writing
The Angel Fish by Finley aged 8
We loved this wonderful description of an Angel Fish by Finley aged 8. He loved writing it and felt really proud of what he had achieved so we thought we would share it.
‘The magestic Angel Fish was slicing through the water like a knife slicing through cucumber. The curved fins were like a machete with grey and silver stripes like a tabby cat. Eyes as red as a tomato stared at the colourful coral. The spinnaker shaped dorsal fin glided through the water as the fish swam along.’ Finley 8
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